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Hi there, thanks a lot for the +favs! I really appreciate it

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You're a great photographer.

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Thanks for the fav!

thanks for addingSRV to your fav's...your 15 and a fantastic photographer...i'm impressed!

16 favourites?! You are intense !thankyou!
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Happens to all of us.

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lol it wasnt rude

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Ah? So you considered that before, huh. Okay. ^^

Yeah.. that mistake on the word "wears" was... on purpose... hahaha...

Fine. I messed up.

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Kay, thanks. "Sometimes, a sentence describing the scenery can portray a character's mood." I started kicking myself there because that's been drilled in my head for over two years. Also, it's Caomhe and Joeri, and "wears," not "wheres." ^^ I depend more on how they act, like... ah, you're only at Chapter Five, you'll see. ^^ Thanks for the feedback.

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WHOA!o.o Thanks for all those favs!:3

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Thank you for favoriting meh dolls!:3

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But I guess I'm just not that kind of person...So I'll write this...[link]

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Have you heard about his strengths and convictions, or how she puts all her faith in religion?

Thank you for the fave, Mary

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Oh thank you for responding to my unequal and rude question!

Remind me to return the favor.

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Mmm, nothing much. ^^
I read up till chapter 5 of your story.
Consider more descriptive writing, mainly that which gives clues to the setting, and about character traits? Sometimes, a sentence describing the scenery can portray a character's mood. Maybe you should give each of your characters odd habits, or just something that sets them apart. Like, Garrett starts to breathe deeply when he gets a new idea, and you can hear him. Chaome has a necklace that she always wears-- for good luck. Joori always wheres hats, and he always looks hip in them. Chaome thinks Keiran looks good in a particular jacket, but she won't admit it.
I like the name Keiran and Joori, too (sorry if I'm spelling them wrong >.<.

Ah, my hands hurt. A friend of mine had to get surgery on both of hers... extra muscles had built up, I think. maybe she was typing too long. She's in her 50s.

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